First Time (Revised)

Heart pounding, eyes darting around.
Kind faces smiling, but I want to frown.
Where do I go? What will it be like?
I feel a little tike.

A tike who lost her mom or dad,
A little girl feeling bad.
But someone greeted me with your warm water.
Reminding me I’m your daughter.

The first time jitters almost won the round
But I have found,
That the battle is the Lord’s.
He’s your Dad, and He’ll always walk you through doors!


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